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Chapter three: OMG Trouble

Along timeafter defeating the coyotte demmon and returning with Narrutos team to the village, everyone was feeling mostly fien and feeling normal for a little bit. Janis, was starting to feel kinda ssick bbut not too bad o she didn't worry about it for a little bit. The healer didn't worry aabout it for a ;little bit.  

but Janis started throwing up later. Kromson kun  and Raychan stayed by her side the entire time, fearing for their buddiez's health. After two weeks of the nauseas and the throwing ups Janis sounded panicked. "Ray-chan, Ray-chan you need to get the healer right now," she gasped with sick feling.

Rayxhan ran out to fetch her, leaving a throwing up Junko with Krimsonkun. "What's the sudden panic for?" He asked as he held Junko's hair back while she gagged.

"My… my p-period is late." She was crying and not feeling too good obviously. Krimsun kun felt uncomffortabble.
"What does that mean?"

"It means that Janis is pregnants!."  Shouted the healer who had just walked into the room. Krimsun kun's face turned white and pale and started sweaty.

"But we only did it once!" He yelled. The healer shook her head.

"Kids these days, once is enough. Youre bodies are mature and really wtf did you expect to happen?" Janis was startled and wworrie!
   
I'm going to be mommy, she thought with hapy. She remembered when kris and her had passionate loves. "Krimssun kun youre going to be a daddy!!!!" She looked around to find him, but he was gone! Ray helped Janis up and led her to the front room where she sat on a couch. Her dreams of having a nice Japanese family living in a Japanese style house with a white picket fence and sending their kids to ninja school on Sailor fuku outfits, vanished as soon as he had left her. "Raychan, why did he leave? We talked about getting married and having family…but he left me! How could he!?"

Raaychan sat beside her and held her hands with her hands. "I don't think that Krimson kun is ready to be a father and he's just scared that;s all." Janis looke dup crying She was so scare and didn't know if she could this baby alone. Raychan huged her tight. "It's okay to cry."

"He promised everything would be okay, and now he's gone!!!!!," Janis cried. "He abandoned me and his babby and us!." She fasped and shouted with worry again "We let Reyvana go free in the forest when we fought her, remember??"

"So…?" Raychan looked confused as alwas.

"So! She might try to hurt the baby! She might com back! I can't fight when I'm pregnants! Oh no, what am I going to do?" One hand flew to her belly and the other to her arm, where there was a pink bandaid which was a reminder of Rayvanas fight with her in the forest in the last chapter.

Raaychan grabbed Janisss' hand and pulled her to her feetss. "Your right, you've got to hide. Kromson kun might have left but I will never leave you or let you down!" The two kunoichi went off into the village with fear. Suddenly the future looked kind of bad for Janis.

To be continue……………………………
ashuri: kinda short chapter but i hope it makes Up for it in Drama :-))))
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:lol: Love how you left in the "new" name from my edit. So you copypasta'd and then added/removed text, eh? It'd be a good way to work with an edited piece if you weren't so sloppy about it.